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TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Which of the following three do you think is the best way to increase high school students’ learning interest? Reply To: Which of the following three do you think is the best way to increase high school students’ learning interest?

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 2, 2020 at 10:36 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Article errors
  4. Wordy sentences – simplify and remove unnecessary words

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