Reply To: Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student’s field of study. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. GRE Writing Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student’s field of study. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. Reply To: Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student’s field of study. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim.

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 3, 2020 at 10:16 am

Score: 30

Issues:

  1. About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Word choice errors
  4. Wordy – remove unnecessary words and phrases

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