Reply To: People should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are very different from what they do at work

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing People should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are very different from what they do at work Reply To: People should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are very different from what they do at work

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 6, 2020 at 5:18 pm

Score: 64.3

Issues:

  1. About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Still some spelling errors
  4. Preposition errors

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