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EuStemJobs Grant Seeker
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University: University of Wisconsin
November 8, 2020 at 4:19 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Only use one transition phrase at the start of a sentence

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