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University: University of Wisconsin
November 8, 2020 at 4:20 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  2. Introduction is unclear
  3. Article errors
  4. Preposition errors

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