Reply To: Responsible tourists could preserve the local culture and environment. Some think it’s impossible to become responsible tourists

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 8, 2020 at 4:22 pm

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  1. About 70% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Spelling errors
  4. Article errors

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