Reply To: Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like Reply To: Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 8, 2020 at 4:26 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. State your argument in the introduction and provide some short supporting information, why do you not agree?

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