Reply To: Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 8, 2020 at 4:26 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. State your argument in the introduction and provide some short supporting information, why do you not agree?

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.