Reply To: Talented people’s leadership is born naturally and cannot be learned by people.

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 19, 2020 at 8:52 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  2. Part of speech errors
  3. Verb form errors
  4. Article errors

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