Reply To: Which is the best way to improve the quality of dormitory life?
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November 20, 2020 at 3:27 am
Score: ungraded
Issues:
- About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
- Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.
- Word choice errors
- Use only one transition phrase per sentence
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