Reply To: Which is the best way to improve the quality of dormitory life?

November 20, 2020 at 3:27 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.
  3. Word choice errors
  4. Use only one transition phrase per sentence

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.