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University: University of Wisconsin
November 20, 2020 at 3:37 am

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  1. Wordy – simplify sentences and remove unnecessary words
  2. Article errors
  3. Word choice errors
  4. Add some supporting information to your argument in the introduction. Why is it the best method?

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