Reply To: When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mail, they will produce better work for the project.

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 20, 2020 at 4:59 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Spelling errors
  3. Article errors
  4. State your argument clearly in the introduction.

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