Reply To: Some people think teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them, but others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. 

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people think teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them, but others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment.  Reply To: Some people think teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them, but others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. 

November 20, 2020 at 10:09 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Lots of confusing pronouns (it, that., etc); remove them or switch to nouns.
  3. Avoid using There BE sentence.

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