Reply To: Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Reply To: Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 20, 2020 at 10:10 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 50% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  2. State your argument in the introduction, why do you disagree?
  3. Preposition errors
  4. Article errors

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