Reply To: Some people think teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them, but others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people think teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them, but others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Reply To: Some people think teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them, but others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 20, 2020 at 10:16 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 110 words.

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