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University: University of Wisconsin
November 20, 2020 at 10:19 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 70% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Wordy – remove unnecessary words and simplify sentences
  3. Transition phrase errors

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