Reply To: The Internet revolution, international travel, and advertising expose people to cultures and customs from around the world. This is having a negative effect on social values.

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 20, 2020 at 10:23 pm

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Issues:

  1. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  2. Spelling errors
  3. Do not just restate the question, instead state your argument in the introduction

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