Reply To: Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays Reply To: Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 23, 2020 at 8:22 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 55% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.

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