Reply To: Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is this case? What can be done to attract local people?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is this case? What can be done to attract local people? Reply To: Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is this case? What can be done to attract local people?

November 23, 2020 at 8:36 pm

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Issues:

  1. About 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 25% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Article errors
  4. Preposition errors

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