Reply To: The president of Grove College has recommended that the college abandon its century-old tradition of all-female education and begin admitting men

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 25, 2020 at 11:25 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Rewrite introduction – it is unclear
  4. Spelling errors

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