Reply To: All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is

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December 3, 2020 at 4:00 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 25% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Article errors
  4. Provide a short reason why you think it is unnecessary in the introduction

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