Reply To: Distance-learning programs have gained in popularity

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University: University of Wisconsin
December 3, 2020 at 4:13 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 55% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 10% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Verb form errors
  4. Add supporting information to your argument in the introduction – Why do you not agree?

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