Reply To: It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

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University: University of Wisconsin
December 3, 2020 at 3:16 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Write in complete sentences
  3. State your argument clearly in the introduction, what side do you agree with and why?
  4. Article errors

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.