Reply To: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important quality for a successful politician or leader to have is good communication skills.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important quality for a successful politician or leader to have is good communication skills. Reply To: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important quality for a successful politician or leader to have is good communication skills.

December 5, 2020 at 2:53 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 65% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.

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