Reply To: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important quality for a successful politician or leader to have is good communication skills.

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December 5, 2020 at 2:53 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 65% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.

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