Reply To: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important quality for a successful politician or leader to have is good communication skills.
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December 5, 2020 at 2:53 am
Score: ungraded
Issues:
- About 65% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
- About 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
- Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.
I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.