Reply To: It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation Reply To: It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation

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University: University of Wisconsin
December 5, 2020 at 3:20 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  2. Article errors
  3. Spelling errors
  4. Verb form errors

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