Reply To: It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation

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University: University of Wisconsin
December 5, 2020 at 3:20 am

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Issues:

  1. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  2. Article errors
  3. Spelling errors
  4. Verb form errors

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