Reply To: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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University: University of Wisconsin
December 5, 2020 at 3:31 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  2. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.
  3. Spelling errors
  4. Word choice errors

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