Reply To: It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Reply To: It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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University: University of Wisconsin
December 5, 2020 at 3:37 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Spacing errors: include a space after punctuation (. ,)
  4. Verb form errors

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