Reply To: Whether you agree with the opinion that sports and social activities are as important as classes and libraries, and should receive equal financial support?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Whether you agree with the opinion that sports and social activities are as important as classes and libraries, and should receive equal financial support? Reply To: Whether you agree with the opinion that sports and social activities are as important as classes and libraries, and should receive equal financial support?

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University: University of Wisconsin
December 5, 2020 at 3:41 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. State your argument in the introduction clearly and provide some short supporting information. Why do you agree?
  3. Word choice errors
  4. Article errors
  5. Plural versus singular errors

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.