Reply To: Which one of the reasons is most important in helping students to succeed in study in colleges and universities? A.having access to the university tutors who can provide individual instruction for the students who have difficulty in study. B.having the help and encouragement from family and friends

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Which one of the reasons is most important in helping students to succeed in study in colleges and universities? A.having access to the university tutors who can provide individual instruction for the students who have difficulty in study. B.having the help and encouragement from family and friends Reply To: Which one of the reasons is most important in helping students to succeed in study in colleges and universities? A.having access to the university tutors who can provide individual instruction for the students who have difficulty in study. B.having the help and encouragement from family and friends

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University: University of Wisconsin
December 5, 2020 at 3:44 am

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Issues:

  1. About 70% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 40% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Many run-on sentences, split longer sentences into multiple ones and eliminate unnecessary words and phrases
  4. Punctuation errors

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