Reply To: Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phones, online games, and social networking websites. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phones, online games, and social networking websites. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Reply To: Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phones, online games, and social networking websites. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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University: University of Wisconsin
December 12, 2020 at 3:58 pm

Score: 58.5

Issues:

  1. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  2. Sentence clarity is the main issue in your essay.

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