Reply To: The ability to make new friends easily is more important for happiness.

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University: University of Wisconsin
December 12, 2020 at 4:55 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. Lengthy paragraphs. Shorten each paragraph to under 90 words. 
  2. Wordy sentences;
  3. Lots of grammatical errors.

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