Reply To: Integrated writing Official 1 Task 1

Administrator
University: University of Wisconsin
December 12, 2020 at 5:26 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.