Reply To: The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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University: University of Wisconsin
December 12, 2020 at 5:29 pm

Score: 57.4

Issues:

  1. About 35% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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