Reply To: Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phones, online games, and social networking Web sites.

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University: University of Wisconsin
December 12, 2020 at 6:09 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 35% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.
  3. Article errors

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