Reply To: Environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Only politicians can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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University: University of Wisconsin
December 12, 2020 at 9:54 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.