Reply To: Responsible tourists could preserve the local culture and environment. Some think it’s impossible to become responsible tourists

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Responsible tourists could preserve the local culture and environment. Some think it’s impossible to become responsible tourists Reply To: Responsible tourists could preserve the local culture and environment. Some think it’s impossible to become responsible tourists

December 12, 2020 at 10:01 pm

Score: 29.9

Issues:

  1. About 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 40% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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