Reply To: Some people believe that going to school early in the morning is good for students’ study. Other students want to start a day late in the morning. Which option do you agree with and why?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Some people believe that going to school early in the morning is good for students’ study. Other students want to start a day late in the morning. Which option do you agree with and why? Reply To: Some people believe that going to school early in the morning is good for students’ study. Other students want to start a day late in the morning. Which option do you agree with and why?

December 13, 2020 at 3:13 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 35% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Repetition of words (i.e., MORE);
  3. Wordy stences.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.