Reply To: Personal Statement for Biological Engineering PhD

Administrator
University: University of Wisconsin
December 15, 2020 at 3:24 pm

Score: 57.2

Issues:

  1. 55% of the sentences exceed 20 words, which makes your essay hard to read.
  2. Most of the 25% passive sentences significantly affect coherence.
  3. Lengthy paragraphs preclude readers from grasping the essay/paragraph structure.
  4. Lengthy essay that can be significantly shortened while retaining all necessary content.
  5. Lots of grammatical/punctuation errors.
  6. Redundant words/sentences.