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University: University of Wisconsin
December 15, 2020 at 4:59 pm

Score: 57.1

Issues:

  1. About 35% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. In consideration of sentence coherence, the subject of a sentence better echoes the subject, or the object, of the prior sentence. The subject of a passive sentence, however, often fails to do so, which severely damages the logical flow between sentences.

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