Reply To: Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Reply To: Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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University: University of Wisconsin
December 18, 2020 at 2:05 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Most of them are unnecessarily lengthy. Simplify or split them.
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. In consideration of sentence coherence, the subject of a sentence better echoes the subject, or the object, of the prior sentence. The subject of a passive sentence, however, often fails to do so, which severely damages the logical flow between sentences.
  3. Lots of grammatical errors.

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