Reply To: Students nowadays do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past.

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January 4, 2021 at 10:33 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Most of them are unnecessarily lengthy. Simplify or split them.

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