Reply To: Integrated Writing. TPO 9
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January 4, 2021 at 10:43 pm
Score: ungraded
Issues:
- About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
- About 25% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts.
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