Reply To: TPO 54 – The Salton Sea in California – Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they respond to the specific concerns presented in the reading passage.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 10, 2021 at 2:40 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. About 35% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. 

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