Reply To: Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don’t know than they were in the past.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don’t know than they were in the past. Reply To: Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don’t know than they were in the past.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 10, 2021 at 2:56 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 100% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. 
  3. Numerous grammatical errors.

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