Reply To: Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don’t know than they were in the past.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 10, 2021 at 2:56 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 100% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. 
  3. Numerous grammatical errors.

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