Reply To: The most important problems affecting our society today can be solved during my lifetime.

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Issues:

1. About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
2. About 20% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. 
3. Lengthy paragraphs. Shorten each paragraph to 90- words.
4. Some grammatical and article problems.

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