Reply To: The most important problems affecting our society today can be solved during my lifetime.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing The most important problems affecting our society today can be solved during my lifetime. Reply To: The most important problems affecting our society today can be solved during my lifetime.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 10, 2021 at 3:13 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. 
  3. Lengthy paragraphs. Shorten each paragraph to 90- words.
  4. Some grammatical and article problems.

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