Reply To: The restoration of old buildings in major cities throughout the world often involves numerous government expenditures. The money will bring more benefits if it is used to provide new housing or road development.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing The restoration of old buildings in major cities throughout the world often involves numerous government expenditures. The money will bring more benefits if it is used to provide new housing or road development. Reply To: The restoration of old buildings in major cities throughout the world often involves numerous government expenditures. The money will bring more benefits if it is used to provide new housing or road development.

January 10, 2021 at 3:15 pm

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Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. Almost all sentences are problematic (grammatical/syntactical errors; unclear; etc.)

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