Reply To: Some people think universities should provide knowledge and skills related to a future career; others think the true function of university is to give access to knowledge for its own sake. What is your opinions of the main function of university?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people think universities should provide knowledge and skills related to a future career; others think the true function of university is to give access to knowledge for its own sake. What is your opinions of the main function of university? Reply To: Some people think universities should provide knowledge and skills related to a future career; others think the true function of university is to give access to knowledge for its own sake. What is your opinions of the main function of university?

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 10, 2021 at 6:37 pm

Score: 44.5

Issues:

  1. About 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. About 30% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. 

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