Reply To: In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.
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January 10, 2021 at 6:48 pm
Score: 56.6
Issues:
- About 35% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
- About 20% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts.
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