Reply To: In some countries, people who are unemployed receive a sum of money each week in the form of a benefit. While some support this, other people believe that this money should not be given. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. › IELTS Writing › In some countries, people who are unemployed receive a sum of money each week in the form of a benefit. While some support this, other people believe that this money should not be given. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. › Reply To: In some countries, people who are unemployed receive a sum of money each week in the form of a benefit. While some support this, other people believe that this money should not be given. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
January 10, 2021 at 6:54 pm
Score: ungraded
Issues:
- About 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
- Most sentences are unclear.
- Minimize the use of ‘ there be..’
I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.