Reply To: In some countries, people who are unemployed receive a sum of money each week in the form of a benefit. While some support this, other people believe that this money should not be given. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing In some countries, people who are unemployed receive a sum of money each week in the form of a benefit. While some support this, other people believe that this money should not be given. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Reply To: In some countries, people who are unemployed receive a sum of money each week in the form of a benefit. While some support this, other people believe that this money should not be given. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 10, 2021 at 6:54 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. Most sentences are unclear.
  3. Minimize the use of ‘ there be..’

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