Reply To: The following letter is from a group of Linford College alumni to the chair of the art department at the college.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 10, 2021 at 7:19 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 35% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. About 30% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. 

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