Reply To: We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own. Reason: Disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. GRE Writing We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own. Reason: Disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning. Reply To: We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own. Reason: Disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 10, 2021 at 7:29 pm

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Issues:

  1. About 35% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 110 words. 

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