Reply To: We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own. Reason: Disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 10, 2021 at 7:29 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 35% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 110 words. 

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